Another day Another poem!

Today I wrote 2 poems 

I wrote one during my lesson and another when I went out for a walk. The first poem I wrote, I was in a bad mood and it made me write as tho this was the case, although I am not being bullied I can imagine what it would be like if it were to happen to someone.

I called this poem - Something to think about. 

I don’t like the feeling of sand beneath my toes 
I don’t like bad hair days but nobody knows
The feeling of people who act like they care
The feeling of people without their despair
 Not only this but i hate my eyes
Not only this but u should also realise
My drive to try 
My drive to die 
I hope next time you change your mind 
I hope next time you try to be kind

to create this poem we did an activity that involved righting down our likes and dislikes which made me think of ways to rhyme and the best ones for rhyming where my dislikes.

The second poem I wrote was when I was going for a late night walk in my Pj's, because i was thinking about the night sky and how beautiful it is, which made me think about how beautiful my crush is.  

I called this poem - About a boy.

Starry skies in your big brown eyes,

Curly hair with your puppy dog stare, 


Waist so skinny although not mini,

Shoulders broad that i applaud, 

Smile lines shine, you look so divine, I pine although you are not mine, 

With a girl best friend you might as well be dead, Fine wine you truly are not mine.


I hope to fine tune my poetry skills and learn more ways of the poetry world, and these two poem made me happy to write.



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